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Post by ~AbyessGaia~ on Mar 14, 2007 15:52:29 GMT -5
Name:Kula Diamond Description: Bio:Tenchi got kula as a gift from his mother and father when he finished middle school NetOp:Tenchi Maisaki Gender:Male Age:16 HP:140 Rank:Leader Element: AquaSpeed: 3 EXP: 0 EXP. Level: 1. MB: 10MB. Buster Ice Shard - 1 Damage* - AquaKula generates a shard of ice and shoots it at the enemy Charged Shot Scatter Shot-x10- AquaKula generates shards of ice around both her hands and launches them all at the opponet Custom Chip Frost Shard - -Standard - Projectile - 80 - K Element: AquaKula generates a ball of aqua and throws it above the enemy and shoots it breaking it into shards of aqua that cover the whole area NaviChip Kule DiamondV1 -Mele - 60 - K + * Code Element: AquaDescription: Kula runs toward the opponet and slashs up,down left,right TimeFreezing
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Post by ~AbyessGaia~ on Mar 15, 2007 19:02:24 GMT -5
i hate to bug but can some tell me if i did it right
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Post by Dalent Ω on Mar 15, 2007 19:42:26 GMT -5
That's alot of line breaks...you didn't need to space things out that much. It's actually much better if you don't. Anywho, onto the navi:
Ice isn't an element. Aqua would be the equivalent. Just change that, and you're good.
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Post by ~AbyessGaia~ on Mar 16, 2007 13:41:13 GMT -5
is that better
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Post by Dalent Ω on Mar 22, 2007 17:04:13 GMT -5
Just changed all the words "Ice" to "Aqua," eh? Messes with the grammer a bit, but you're approved.
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