Ancient
Novice Netbattler
I'm Back!
Posts: 4
|
Zero
Jan 12, 2007 1:11:51 GMT -5
Post by Ancient on Jan 12, 2007 1:11:51 GMT -5
Main InfoName: Zero Description: Picture of ZeroBio: Bio of ZeroNetOp: Ancient StatisticsHP: 80 Rank: Speed Element: Null Speed: 5 StatisticsEXP: 0 Level: 1 MB: 10 BusterZ Buster - 1 Damage - Null Description: Zero shoots directly at his opponent. The charged shot takes 2 turn to use and does 10x buster damage. Custom ChipZ Saber - Slash - 60dmg - Code Z - Null - Standard - Long Description: Zero warps to the space in front of his opponent and slashes them with his Z Saber. NaviChipZero v1 - Navi - 50dmg - Timefreezing - Codes Z,* - Null Description: Zero warps to the space in front of his opponent and slashes them three times with his Z Saber. Chip Folder2x Cannon A 2x Cannon B 2x Airshot * 1x PanelGrab S 1x Sword S 1x WideSword S 1x Reflector1 A 2x Vulcan1 B 1x Panelgrab * 2x MachGun1 T
|
|
|
Zero
Jan 12, 2007 1:24:13 GMT -5
Post by Dalent Ω on Jan 12, 2007 1:24:13 GMT -5
Okay, a few things wrong with this:
1.) Your Custom Chip is warp type...more like Slash. And since it would be Slash, there would be no need for a Speed. And the code would be Z, not *. 2.) You need to be more descriptive...look at other approved navis for examples. 3.) Not really something wrong, but...WHY DOES EVERYONE PICK SPEED?!?!?!?
|
|
Ancient
Novice Netbattler
I'm Back!
Posts: 4
|
Zero
Jan 12, 2007 2:09:44 GMT -5
Post by Ancient on Jan 12, 2007 2:09:44 GMT -5
Everyone chooses speed because it has the best advantages. And with which attributes should I be more descriptive with?
I modified the custom chip by the way.
|
|
|
Zero
Jan 12, 2007 2:44:56 GMT -5
Post by Dalent Ω on Jan 12, 2007 2:44:56 GMT -5
For the Custom Chip, it would be good to say how the slash is. Long? Wide? And state that it's a Standard Custom Chip. Also, the NaviChip has no description.
|
|
Ancient
Novice Netbattler
I'm Back!
Posts: 4
|
Zero
Jan 21, 2007 16:48:44 GMT -5
Post by Ancient on Jan 21, 2007 16:48:44 GMT -5
Alright, I did what you said to do.
|
|
|
Zero
Jan 21, 2007 21:27:37 GMT -5
Post by Aran on Jan 21, 2007 21:27:37 GMT -5
Navi Chip is to strong..is it not?
|
|
|
Zero
Jan 22, 2007 2:08:29 GMT -5
Post by william on Jan 22, 2007 2:08:29 GMT -5
No, it's not. Approved.
|
|
|
Zero
Jan 22, 2007 8:03:23 GMT -5
Post by Dalent Ω on Jan 22, 2007 8:03:23 GMT -5
Just letting you know, Sword is an Element...
|
|
|
Zero
Jan 22, 2007 15:55:38 GMT -5
Post by william on Jan 22, 2007 15:55:38 GMT -5
Yes. An element you have to buy...
|
|
|
Zero
Jan 22, 2007 16:36:57 GMT -5
Post by Dalent Ω on Jan 22, 2007 16:36:57 GMT -5
Not for Custom Chip elements. So, the Z-Saber can be Sword Element.
|
|
Ancient
Novice Netbattler
I'm Back!
Posts: 4
|
Zero
Jan 22, 2007 17:40:21 GMT -5
Post by Ancient on Jan 22, 2007 17:40:21 GMT -5
Well then shouldn't one of the admins move this thread to the Approved Navis board?
|
|
|
Zero
Jan 22, 2007 17:50:24 GMT -5
Post by Dalent Ω on Jan 22, 2007 17:50:24 GMT -5
I knew that...
<_< >_> >_<
|
|